Knowledge C
- Uncle Andy
- Flies
Comprehension C
Uncle Andy bought the singlet from an army surplus store. He said “Oh, I will sing of the singlet,” cried Uncle Andy. The singlet made a useful Pouch to carry new laid eggs. “Oh I will sing of the singlet,” Uncle Andy cries. But there's only one small problem it does attract the flies.
Application A
- I am chubby
- I have a singlet
- I am a farmer
- I have black hair
- I like have fry-up of little silver fishes.
- I cry
Analysing A
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:(
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Other
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The singlet was useful
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When Uncle Andy’s sings it attracts the flies
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It was a hot sunny day
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New ideas C
Uncle Andy died because the flies sucked his blood like vampires. The police came to Uncle Andy’s house to kill the dangerous flies and to pick his body.
Evaluation A
I rate this poem 7 out of 10 because I don't like flies.
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