I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, March 22, 2018
The Pirate Shop
The Pirate Shop Lucky Lulu was sinking quickly. “Abandon shop! Everyone into the Rockets!” hollered Captain Francisco. But the crew and passengers knew there were not enough Rockets, so they threw each other and even one delicious bowl overboard. Then everyone disappeared into the dirty stinky water and grabbed onto whatever they could.
Captain Hagrid ordered everyone to form a line, tie their crafts together, and sing “Finesse by Planet Mars”. First in line were Donald Trump and Jack Obama , bobbing in their expensive lamborghini. Next, came Jake Paul hanging on for dear life to a slimy dog poop They were followed by billions of cats.
After seven days, they were rescued by a strange man named Miguel wearing Hills Shoes . Not one passenger from the Lucky Lulu has taken a boat ride again.
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Hey Miguel, Your writing font is very big so you need to fix that.
ReplyDeleteSorry but thank you for reminding me that.
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ReplyDeleteHI Miguel
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you put your friends in your Abandoned Haunted Island.
My favorite part of your writing was that you told what to not go on and on your Information report.I have actually this before on Friday and i like it so much.