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Thursday, July 25, 2019
Narrative Story ART HURUMANU
Kamusta readers this week I finished the Manaakitanga narrative story in our Art Hurumanu. In this story they show Manaakitanga by being helpful like donating 10 MILLION DOLLARS to a school and helping pushing a bank truck to a school. I hope you enjoy this story and we are also making a stop motion using clay and we are gonna base it on this story. Thank you for READING THIS!
MANAAKITANGA
Mr. Sutton the kindest principal of Hornby High School was having an enormous problem he needed 10million dollars!, to finish constructing up the new buildings that he wanted to construct at the school. Mr. Sutton thought that he would ask one of the richest couples in the world to borrow 10million dollars, he wanted to ask the rich couple Charlie and Rose. Mr. Sutton rushed to grab his phone off his office table and quickly tapped Charlie’s name on the call list (Charlie’s name is on the call list because Mr. Sutton once called him to help him to build Hornby High School) and the phone started to ring.” Kia Ora Robin how can I help you?” asked Charlie, “ Could I borrow 10million dollars to finish constructing the buildings that I was planning to build?” asked Mr. Sutton/Robin “ Absolutely Robin” responded Charlie, “ the call ended”.
Mr. Sutton received a message from Charlie that says “Me and Rose will send the 10 million dollar using a bank truck, the bank will not let us send the money with card, the truck will be there at 10pm”. The bank gave the 10 million dollar cash to Charlie and Rose to put on the bank truck. 4 men inside the bank heard the conversation of Charlie and Rose that they will transfer 10million dollars using a truck. The 4 men rushed out of the bank and quickly opened the car doors, the car zoomed away from the bank and disappeared in the distance.
It was 9:30pm and the bank truck started to travel to from the bank to Hornby High School. The bank truck suddenly came to a halt it was half way to Hornby High School, and 4 hooded figures came out of the mist. It was then they knew that their truck ran out of gas, the driver complained to his mind that he drove to the gas station before he drove off. It was the 4 men inside the bank that drained the bank truck when the driver was paying inside the gas station, and the 4 hooded men was them!
The driver looked out on the window to see if anyone was outside so that he can ask for help, his eyes grew big as he was scratching the steering wheel when he saw the 4 hooded men had a bat a gun and a knife. His arms quickly reached the door and opened it and ran to the nearest house. He was so nervous that he knocked so hard on the door, his eyes were full of fear and was shaking like it was the coldest time he had experienced. A man inside the house opened the door and shouted “ WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?!”, “ fo-fou four hooded man was standing in front of the bank truck I was driving” He responded while he was shaking. One of the men standing in front of the bank truck was holding a crowbar.
The man holding a crowbar sprinted at the back of the truck and used his strength and crowbar to open the door. Each man had a bag to put the money inside. They took the money out of the truck without any hesitation, as they were grabbing the money inside, sirens from far away started to get louder and louder as if it was coming closer. When they the 4 men heard the sirens they panicked and panicked and dropped the bags full of money and sprinted as fast as they could away from the truck like Usain Bolt. Unfortunately they were blocked with the police cars. The 4 men were caught!
The truck driver and the man inside the house he knocked onto called the police for help. People in their house heard the sirens and had a look outside their house, and when they asked the truck driver what had happened, when they knew that the truck ran out of fuel, they volunteered to push the truck to Hornby High School.
The buildings in Hornby High School was finished constructing and Mr. Sutton was thankful to Charlie, Rose, the bus driver and all the people that helped to push the truck they were all happy, and the bus driver was promoted to be in charge with the bank trucks.
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