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Friday, November 8, 2019

Persuasive Writing

Kamusta today in Friday we had to pick a question for our Persuasive Writing, I picked the question "Children would learn better if lunches were provided" and I totally agree with it, here are some of the ideas I think why children would learn better if lunches were provided.


Children would learn better if lunches were provided
  • Children would have more energy to learn if lunch were provided
  • Some of food should be free such as fruits and vegetables for children and food should also be given to children with low income
  • Lunch gives you energy, lunch raises your blood sugar level making you able to focus in the middle of the day, that’s why lunch should be provided to children that doesn’t have a lot of food to eat.
  • Lunch is also where children get their vitamins and nutrients.

STATEMENT:
For children lunch is very important because this is when they get their vitamins and nutrients for the day.

Some of the food should also be free for all students, such as vegetables and fruits. 

And also lunch gives you energy, lunch raises your blood sugar level making you able to focus that’s why it is good for the school to provide lunch.

1 comment:

  1. kia ora miguel.Brayden from yaldhurst school.
    I loved this because I am with you on it that lunches are provided.You are right about that.You taught me that kids should get lunch provided it seems fair because what if they forget their lunch.Next time you could explain further about it and what you think should change in 2020.
    kind regards
    brayden yms.

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