The greatest showman/The Greatest Tom Jack

The Magic Show By Miguel


Jack was big tall man that had a short black hair, with a joyful smile and face. He wears a red coat and a shining white top with a gold looking armor at the front. He was holding a long mysterious magical wand up on the whispering gentle air. He also wears his black beautiful pants that was as long as his long legs. He had shoes that were as black as his pants. He was performing.






Jack had to fly on an aeroplane to perform on a stage in America called America’s Got talent. That is where people go when they want to show their incredible talents. The stage was incredibly enormous like it was a cage of a t-rex, and there was a lot of people cheering on every incredible tricks that they saw. Inside it smells like a cooked chicken. All you will be able to hear in the stage is people cheering or people booing.






So Jack attended to the show to show his amazing magic tricks that made the four judges say “Wow!”. One of the judges hit the golden buzzer which is the buzzer that puts you straight on the finals.






After a few months it was time to go to the finals so Jack prepared the magic tricks that he was going to show to the four rich judges. It was a long long drive until Jack and James his driver arrived there. Jack waited for the other performers to have their turn, after everybody had their turn it was time for Jack to go stand on the enormous stage. He was terribly nervous because he thought he might fail his amazing tricks and that he might not win. Jack didn’t fail his incredible magic tricks he actually made the four amazing judges say “Wow” again, and he made their mouths wide open as their eyes did the same.






After all that they were going to announced who the winner is. Jack was so nervous that he might not be the one. But when the judges announced who the winner is they shouted “Tom Jack”. Happy tears came out of Jack’s eyes and he shouted out “thank you”, loudly in to the microphone.

Characters Description:The greatest Tom Jack

Jack was big tall man that had a short black hair, with a joyful smile and face. He wears a red coat and a shining white top with a gold looking armor at the front. He is holding a long mysterious magical wand up on the whispering gentle air. He also wears his black beautiful pants that was as long as his long legs. He had shoes that were as black as his pants. He was performing.





Jack had to go on an aeroplane to perform on a stage in America called America’s got talent. That is were people go when they want to show their incredible talents.





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So Jack attended to the show to show his amazing magic tricks that made the four judges say “Wow!”. One of the judges hit the golden buzzer which is the buzzer that puts you straight on the finals. After a few months it was time to go to the finals so he prepared the magic tricks that he was going to show to the four rich judges. It was a long long drive until they got there. Jack waited for the other performers to have his turn, after everybody had their turn it was time for Jack to go stand on the enormous stage. He was terribly nervous because he thought he might fail his amazing tricks and that he might not win. Jack didn’t fail his incredible magic tricks he actually made the four amazing judges say “Wow” again. After all that they were going to announced who the winner is. Jack was so nervous that he might not be the one. But when the judges announced who the winner is they shouted





Mrs N said, Good to see you caught up after some off task time Miguel.


Well sequenced. Great description in the first paragraph.


Love the line ‘ He felt terribly nervous’.


Next Step: In the second paragraph slow down a little and describe the stage and setting , (sights, sounds, colours etc) where the competition was being held. Describe the judges, looks on their faces etc.


Next idea or part of story = new paragraph. I have put a couple of lines in for you. :)

When I Grow Up

When I grow up

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Please make sure that you write your answers to the questions in FULL SENTENCES

Who was the main character being smart to? He was being smart to Steve Jackson.

Why was he being smart to Steve Jackson? He was being smart to Steve Jackson because he was giving little kids a hard time.

What did he say he would try out for first when he was older? He said he can run really fast that maybe he can try it out for the Olympics.

Where did he hide from the bullies? He hid behind a hedge when he heard that the bullies was up the road behind him.

What did he say he was going to do second when he was older? He said the he was a pretty good climber that maybe he would a mountaineer.

Who came out to see where he was? His mum and his sister came out to see where he was.

What could he hear while he was up the tree? He heard sirens when he was up the tree.

What did he say he was going to be third when he grew up? He wondered if he could be a policeman when he grow up

What is a hydraulic platform? What was it used for? Hydraulic platform is used for to save people that is on a high building.

At the end of the story… who did he want to be when he grew up and why didn’t he think it was the best time to tell dad? Cory wanted to be a fire brigade he didn’t think it was the bet time to tell dad because he did a dangerous thing.

Blooms Taks

       Knowledge A

1. Huskies
2. Ray

Comprehension B

 

Ray Marshall and his three siberian huskies are out training with other members of the husky club. They choose the cool early morning or the late evening , for huskies are Arctic animals.

      Application A

1. I'm a dog
2. I’m  an Arctic animal
3. I’m a pet
4. I’m always clean
5. My name starts in letter H
6. I’m white

Analysing B

Ray	Husky
I love my huskies	I love racing I’m always clean

New Ideas C

Rays huskies was announced as the seconds fastest animal in the world. Ray’s huskies raced with the cheetahs.  The unthinkable happened the huskies was wast first and the cheetahs were second.

Evaluating A

I rate this story 10 out of 10 because it's about huskies and i like huskies.

Blooms Task

             Knowledge C    

1. Uncle Andy
2. Flies

Comprehension C

Uncle Andy bought the singlet from an army surplus store. He said “Oh, I will sing of the singlet,” cried Uncle Andy. The singlet made a useful Pouch to carry new laid eggs. “Oh I will sing of the singlet,” Uncle Andy cries. But there's only one small problem it does attract the flies.

    Application A

1. I am chubby
2. I have a singlet
3. I am a farmer
4. I have black hair
5. I like have fry-up of little silver fishes.
6. I cry

Analysing A

:)	:(	Other
The singlet was useful	When Uncle Andy’s sings it attracts the flies	It was a hot sunny day

New ideas C

Uncle Andy died because the flies sucked his blood like vampires. The police came to Uncle Andy’s house to kill the dangerous flies  and to pick his body.

Evaluation A

I rate this poem 7 out of 10 because I don't like flies.

  

Just Busking

Just Busking

Just Busking

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What does the right hand grip? He's right hand grips a battered ghetto blaster

2. What does the crazy old country guy set up? The old street country guy sets his ten-tonne amp at the Bank corner.

3. What does the world timidly mean? Timidly means in manner and confidence.

4. What does Tau play? Tau plays a guitar with his brother.

5. What does his brother play? Tau’s brother is a very cool drummer.

6. What is uncle wearing? Tau’s uncle was wearing a suit and a white shirt.

7. Why do you think people busk? Busk means playing instrument in the streets.

8. Where is Bob Marley from? Bob Marley comes from Nine Mile, Jamaica.

9. What happened to the man on the street? The old street guy died when Crystal turned switched off he’s ghetto blaster.

10. What did the the children do when they realised something was wrong with the man on the street? Tau went running to the Jeans Shop for help because the old street guy has died.